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This revised version begins with a sonnet, omits stanza four and has a number of small changes to punctuation, typeface and word contractions. A line, missing from the original fifth stanza, is inserted and each stanza is numbered.
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Epigraph: Dark river of Death that is flowing / Between the bright city and me. (James Edmeston 1791-1867)
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Serialised in three instalments in The Illawarra Mercury on 18 June, 12 & 30 July, 1861.